Not long ago a friend in the book biz referred a writer to me. She’d written a YA novel, this writer; when she emailed me, I told her I really enjoy YA, but that I require a synopsis and sample chapters before I decide to put a project on my production schedule. This is stated on my website—though, interestingly, many people don’t actually investigate my website before they contact me about work. You heard me correctly: I don’t accept every editing job I’m offered. I require a synopsis and sample chapters for evaluation first.
Why? I’ve learned the hard way.
When I was much newer to this business, less experienced, I would excitedly say yes to everyone. Yes! Yes! I had so much confidence. I was sure I could edit—improve—any manuscript. Yes!
But now I know I can’t. Many manuscripts can’t be “fixed” by editing. (I’ve tried, but attempting to discuss an inexperienced writer into writing a better book can be soul-destroying work. What’s that old saw about teaching a pig to sing? It wastes your time and annoys the pig.)
Some writers need to learn more about writing itself—about creating sentences and paragraphs and stringing ideas together coherently—before they’re ready. Some writers need to learn about narrative, about story structure, about pacing, before they can actually compose a story (fiction or not) with a beginning, middle, and end. These writers need a teacher, not an editor.
So I ask for a writing sample and a synopsis. I usually spend an hour reviewing the materials. And then I make a decision. Can I bring something to the writer’s project? That’s what I ask myself. In the case of last week’s referral, I said no. Not just no, though.
I’ve reviewed your chapters and synopsis and I fear that your manuscript isn’t really ready for editing yet. Part of the problem is that it seems written more to propound an agenda than it is about making the story irresistible. It’s not a bad agenda :) but story is much more important than message, always. Right now, even the synopsis is a little contrived to make the agenda work, and there are holes where things don’t seem logical.
I went on to tell her some very specific things she should look at, and I provided links to six articles I’ve written that addressed those precise craft issues. For example:
Take a look at this formula and see if you can write your story into it. I’d be interested in seeing that.
Or answer these questions. Same thing.
Note here that the story-worthy problem in your case isn’t the message/theme you’re trying to support—it’s in the actual story. It’s your main character’s problem. It’s that she wants to not have to live a lie anymore.
I also addressed some red flags I noticed in her synopsis.
“Helena, age 17, doesn’t feel brave or particularly hopeful when she wakes up in a strange place.” You’re telling me this in the synopsis but I didn’t sense it in the opening scene of chapter 1 at all. Instead, Helena was astonished but seemed to expect to be there, given that she said, “Joanie didn’t tell me about this.” Also, she immediately decided what to do and went to explore. So the motives and what the character feels are sort of at odds with the synopsis already. To be frank, I’m much more curious about Joanie and her role in the story.
There were four other points in the first three paragraphs of Claire’s synopsis that concerned me, and I enumerated those. It’s important to me that I am both frank and kind, while maintaining good boundaries about how much free critique I can provide. I don’t want to crush anyone; I want to offer options for next steps, even if they are not taken with me.
I’ve spent as much time on this as I can afford to, but I would recommend you rethink and rework your synopsis until your story is irresistible and airtight. Fantastical elements are fine, a message is fine, but story and plot are the most important things. If, somewhere down the line, you’d like to talk again, I offer critiques of synopses, of first three chapters, and even of the entire MS. I just think you need to tweak this before we start that kind of work.
Thank you again, Claire, for your confidence in me. I wish I had better news for you but editing is not inexpensive, and I think you could profit from another pass at the manuscript before you begin that process. Let me know if you have any questions.
Editing is absolutely not cheap. It would be easy to take advantage of the hunger some folks have to write, edit, and publish a book—and there are at least two well-known people I know right here in Middle Tennessee who are doing it (another blog post for another time)—but I don’t have it in me to do that. Editing is not a miracle cure, and no editor can guarantee you a best seller.
Everyone who sends me the writing sample and synopsis hears back from me. Every once in a while I strike out: a couple years ago, a man was so offended by my mini-critique that he—well, let’s just say I’ve never had anyone speak to me like that, ever. Oh, and he critiqued the blog post I referred him to (my grade: F). This man was in the minority, though; I don’t hear back at all from most folks. (What’s up with that, anyway?)
But Claire (not her real name, of course) is the sort of person I’d like to work with one day. “That was the most helpful rejection letter I’ve ever received,” she wrote. “Thank you so much for taking the time to explain why my manuscript isn’t ready and for providing direction so that, in time, it will be ready.” She made my day with that email.
Every so often, I feel I need to remind you that I genuinely enjoy what I do for a living. However, editing is not something I can do by myself. I can’t wave a magic wand and turn a manuscript into something publishable. The author has to be ready too. It’s a team effort, a partnership.
* Snake-oil salesman was one of my father’s favorite phrases.
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